Changes for the english 103 Research Paper

My research paper is about the movie Autism --Temple Grandin 2010. It is really true and emotional story, but I don't know how I am writing an exact emotions in the essay. Well, at first I have found this stuff quite easy but after I have passed few days, I am finding the stuff to be more difficult. Any ways , I am learning to write in a good format upto my classes are done.But after geeting Professor Drangon's feed back I am hoping to do good in my draft. Well, its very tough for me to understand but I got some of his advice, which helps me to write in a good shape .